Underneath the shade of misconception
words that don't mean a thing
weigh heaviest on broken wings
silence sings and emptiness rings
words curl up and drift away
their meaning lost when no one stays
wounds never heal, insecurities bleed
in the dark, the black rains come
seeking redemption, then drowning the need
beneath the stains of time, the feelings disappear.
Dahlia Ramone: October 16, 2016
This was written for Blogophilia Week 35.9
Topic: Black Rain
Bonuses: Hard (2 pts): Incorporate a Johnny Cash lyric *
Easy (1 pt): Include a fireball (I didn't)
* "beneath the stains of time, the feelings disappear" - 'Hurt'
Stunned! So glad you wrote this ! Fantastic poem! insecurities do indeed bleed
ReplyDeleteWell done. Love the flow.
ReplyDeleteexcellent and so perfect for this weather...and full moon.
ReplyDeleteTalking to myself never nets positive results, but talking to others, who are nowhere in sight can be cathartic.
ReplyDeleteYou and I have some great conversation moments. <3
Wow, so full of imagery and emotion....this is a superb and succinct poem!!!! HUGGS (((Dollface)))! <3
ReplyDeleteLove it, Dollface! <3
ReplyDeleteIrene
Really powerful.
ReplyDeleteActions resonate long after words fade
ReplyDeleteVery powerful in presentation For me the "broken wings" gathered in my imagination and captured my thoughts. 7 points Earthling! :)
ReplyDeleteMartien
Loved it.
ReplyDeleteStormy
deep feelings... very moving.. xxx
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