Thursday, December 29, 2016

Picnics and Promises (Under the Moonlit Sky)



 
~ Picnics and Promises (Under the Moonlit Sky) ~
 
Stars provide the candlelight
my heart is the blanket
and the moon -
she is your conscience
 
is she true?
does she waver?
is it possible to betray the moon?
 
lay gently on my heart
let me wrap it around you
the softest promise of warmth
against any chill the night may bring
 
the wind whispers:
I found something I love... and never gave up
 
I offer you pieces of me:
morsels of my fears, my strengths, my scars, my love
are you hungry?
what does the moon say to you?
 
you taste, but you struggle with thirst
you uncork a bottle
and I fill your glass with champagne tears
but the moon won't allow you to drink
 
you pour me a glass of your own
and I swear I saw the moon's shadow
in the reflection of your eyes as you studied my face
 
you rest your check against my blanket
the moon lifts her shadow as you drift to sleep
 
perhaps you are listening to her now.
 
 
(c) Dahlia Ramone:  December 29, 2016
 
 
 
This was written for Blogophilia
Week 45.9 Topic: Picnic Under the Moonlight Sky
 
Bonus Points:
Hard (2 pts): Quote Michael Phelps *
Easy (1 pt): Mention a famous dog
(Shadow - 'Homeward Bound')
 
*"I found something I love... and never gave up"
 
 
 
 
 
 

10 comments:

  1. This poem is personal on several levels. Through it all and to the close, I am left to wonder, how that works... the betrayal profer...
    Initially, I say, I hope it is possible, but subjective reasoning tells me, "No, the moon is above."

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  2. You have such a strong relation with the moon, I might be jealous

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  3. You honor the moon and she basks in your glow

    Great poem!

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  4. Dollface, your poems are always beautifully expressed! <3

    Irene

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  5. You are the moon in my sky!
    8 points Earthling! :)

    Martien

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  6. So beautiful and filled with ethereal layers. Love it!!

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  7. No one can describe the moon quite elegantly as you do. Love it, dollface! <3

    Leta xoxo

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  8. This moves me to champagne tears....so tender and loving! The moon is certainly your muse, my friend. Love you! Happy New Year!! xoxoxo <3

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