~ Sojourn with the Devil ~
"Name your price" the devil said, "and you can have it all"
he looked at me intently, wanting me to fall
but I could hear the sunlight, banging on the wall
it wasn't over yet, I just needed time to stall
they say all things are cyclical
and I've been ever cynical
and I've been ever cynical
the devil's promise... so cryptical
and my next move is critical
I listen for the sunlight, it whispers your name
the devil's eyes light up, he knows how to play this game
"it's cyclical" he tells me, "it always ends the same"
I search deep within and wonder where to lay the blame
the room grows darker, I'm losing the sun
walls are closing in, there's nowhere to run
time seems to be over before it's begun
the devil smiles gleefully, thinking he's won
but he doesn't have me yet, and watches in dismay
as I fall to my knees and begin to pray
it's not a long walk if you meet me halfway
don't be the sun that fades away.
(c) Dahlia Ramone: August 20, 2017
This was written for Blogophilia
Week 26.10 Topic: Name Your Price
Bonus Prompts:
Hard (2 pts): Include a lyric or song title from The Grateful Dead *
Easy (1 pt): Use Last Shadow Puppy lyrics **
* Don't be the sun that fades away (from Easy to Love You)
(last line)
** Sunlight banging on your wall (from Pattern)
(third line)
Gosh this is so good. Bravo
ReplyDeleteStormy
*Smiles* Thank you, Stormy :)
DeleteWay to run to the light. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteIt's not over 'til it's over ;)
DeleteVery well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Christopher :)
DeleteWOW!!! This is genius....love love love the rhythm, the rhyme and the synchronicity of such a topic!! I also love that Elton Song sung by Oleta!! She also sings another fave song...Just Get here, or Get here now! lol Can't remember the exact title!! Going back to read this again!! I might save it as one of my faves of yours!!! xo
ReplyDeleteYes - "Get Here" I love her version. I need to get her album, because I just love her voice so much.
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you!! I'm always touched when one of my poems gets you like that :)
This just makes me smile
ReplyDeleteAnd that makes me smile :)
DeleteI loved this, Dollface!
ReplyDeleteIrene
Keep walking away and don't look back. 8 points Earthling
ReplyDelete-Martien
I love it!
ReplyDeleteI like where the topics took you! :)
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