Sunday, April 22, 2018

Of Love and Dreams

 
~ Of Love and Dreams ~
 
I've always dreamed of idyllic things
Cornwall in Spring, wishes on wings
I care naught for castles and kings
just a knight, with a heart that sings
 
heaven on earth, such a place exists
lovers know it, from the moment they've kissed
their world transports into moonlit mists
prose turns to poetry, romance insists
 
here is the deepest secret nobody knows:
- they say love comes, and then love goes
well, it's those naysayers I oppose -
I believe love, true love, only grows
 
the birds know this song, follow their trill
the bees will help guide you, they've fate to fulfill
the moon and the sun and the stars all thrill
our coming together has been their will
 
yours is the light by which my spirit's born
and it's that purity of love which we shall adorn
 
there will be no greater love story than our memoirs
you are my sun, my moon and my stars
 
(c) Dahlia Ramone:  April 22, 2018
 
 
 
This was written for Blogophilia
 
Week 8.11 Topic:  Birds and Bees
 
Bonus Prompts:
Hard (2 pts):  Quote or include a line from e.e. Cummings
(I've included two) *
Easy (1 pt):  Include a town in Vermont (Cornwall)
 
* "here is the deepest secret nobody knows"
(third stanza)
&
"yours is the light by which my spirit's born -
you are my sun, my moon and all my stars"
(I split this one up into the last two couplets)
 
 
 
(my very favorite poem, happens to be this one)
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
 
 
 


14 comments:

  1. Wow, I just loved the hopeful message and beautiful uplifting feel of this piece, so very well done my friend!! xo

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    1. Thank you, C - your kind words always humble me <3

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  2. Oh and I will remember to read that poem at your Wedding...perhaps on a cliff in Cornwall, during the Spring. lol

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    1. To Aidan Turner? :D And yes, that poem would be wonderful to include at the end of the ceremony (gotta put the Princess Bride part in the beginning) lolol!

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    2. Mawidge to Aiden Turner? Well you might have to fight me for him. lol

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  3. Follow their trill. That line is phenomenal. GOT quote to boot.

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  4. Ahhhh..... another lovely write! Love it. Love you, dollface!! xoxo

    Leta

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  5. OMG this is soo romantically beautiful!! This piece is chock full of visuals and emotion. I adore this - and adore you, my sweet friend! xoxo

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  6. You take love storying to a whole another level here, Dahlia. Anyone who reads this is going to honestly believe there is a chance, even for them. Who could ask for more?

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  7. So upbeat and romantic - loved it

    Tyler

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  8. You have me humming Belinda Carlisle. 8 points Earthling

    Martien

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  9. I love this form of poetry. Yours is so well writtem.

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