~ Of Love and Dreams ~
I've always dreamed of idyllic things
Cornwall in Spring, wishes on wings
I care naught for castles and kings
just a knight, with a heart that sings
heaven on earth, such a place exists
lovers know it, from the moment they've kissed
their world transports into moonlit mists
prose turns to poetry, romance insists
here is the deepest secret nobody knows:
- they say love comes, and then love goes
well, it's those naysayers I oppose -
I believe love, true love, only grows
the birds know this song, follow their trill
the bees will help guide you, they've fate to fulfill
the moon and the sun and the stars all thrill
our coming together has been their will
yours is the light by which my spirit's born
and it's that purity of love which we shall adorn
there will be no greater love story than our memoirs
you are my sun, my moon and my stars
(c) Dahlia Ramone: April 22, 2018
This was written for Blogophilia
Week 8.11 Topic: Birds and Bees
Bonus Prompts:
Hard (2 pts): Quote or include a line from e.e. Cummings
(I've included two) *
Easy (1 pt): Include a town in Vermont (Cornwall)
* "here is the deepest secret nobody knows"
(third stanza)
&
"yours is the light by which my spirit's born -
you are my sun, my moon and all my stars"
(I split this one up into the last two couplets)
(my very favorite poem, happens to be this one)
Wow, I just loved the hopeful message and beautiful uplifting feel of this piece, so very well done my friend!! xo
ReplyDeleteThank you, C - your kind words always humble me <3
DeleteOh and I will remember to read that poem at your Wedding...perhaps on a cliff in Cornwall, during the Spring. lol
ReplyDeleteTo Aidan Turner? :D And yes, that poem would be wonderful to include at the end of the ceremony (gotta put the Princess Bride part in the beginning) lolol!
DeleteMawidge to Aiden Turner? Well you might have to fight me for him. lol
DeleteFollow their trill. That line is phenomenal. GOT quote to boot.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brian. And I do love that GoT quote :)
DeleteAhhhh..... another lovely write! Love it. Love you, dollface!! xoxo
ReplyDeleteLeta
OMG this is soo romantically beautiful!! This piece is chock full of visuals and emotion. I adore this - and adore you, my sweet friend! xoxo
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written! :)
ReplyDeleteYou take love storying to a whole another level here, Dahlia. Anyone who reads this is going to honestly believe there is a chance, even for them. Who could ask for more?
ReplyDeleteSo upbeat and romantic - loved it
ReplyDeleteTyler
You have me humming Belinda Carlisle. 8 points Earthling
ReplyDeleteMartien
I love this form of poetry. Yours is so well writtem.
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