Sunday, May 13, 2018

Follow Me

 
 
 
If I told you
that I couldn't promise the sun would always shine
but I could promise you would always know warmth
like warm amber on an onyx night
would you follow me?
 
If I told you
that I couldn't promise the moon would always come out
but I could promise my heart would always shine
lighting the way for you
would you follow me?
 
If I told you
that I couldn't promise the wind won't bite when it blows
but I could promise you shelter
wrapped up in my arms
would you follow me?
 
If I told you
that I couldn't promise some days won't taste bitter
but I could promise life together would be sweet
and that we would always crave each other
would you follow me?
 
If I told you
that I can see for miles and miles
the beauty in days, the magic of nights
and I could weave them into every moment
would you follow me?
 
I can tell the truth and make it right
you will know the warmth, see the light
feel the breeze and taste the love
if you have a place in your heart
to follow me.
 
(c) Dahlia Ramone:  May 13, 2018
 
 
 
This was written for Blogophilia
Week 11.11 Topic:  A Place in Your Heart
 
Bonus Prompts:
 
Hard ( 2pts):  Incorporate the phrase "I can see for miles and miles"
(fifth stanza)
 
Easy (1 pt):  Use a country lyric *
(Last stanza)
 
* Tell the truth and make it right
(from "Feed Jake" by Pirates of the Mississippi)
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


15 comments:

  1. This week's prompts were right up your alley in Nashville Speak. Romance and happy endings only add to the luster. You are going to make a lot of readers happy.

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  2. like warm amber on an onyx night
    would you follow me?


    Best line!!!

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  3. Love the determination and optimism here.

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    1. Thanks, Tyler. One of these days it'll pay off haha!

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  4. Oh my God!! I love this so much!! Can you copy and paste a copy for me? This would make a gorgeous reading at a wedding. You are a true Poet!! ❤️

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    1. Wow, C - that is the biggest compliment. I hadn't thought of it being part of a wedding, thank you for that! And I emailed a clean copy to your email address :) xoxo

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  5. You know we'd follow you anywhere except maybe line dancing. 8 points Earthling!

    Martien

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    1. Haha! You know I'd never lead you into line dancing. A mosh pit, maybe :D

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  6. Ahhhhh this is soooooooo damn romantic and dreamy! You did an amazing job, country lyric and all! Love this and love you, Dollface! xoxo

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