If I told you
that I couldn't promise the sun would always shine
but I could promise you would always know warmth
like warm amber on an onyx night
would you follow me?
If I told you
that I couldn't promise the moon would always come out
but I could promise my heart would always shine
lighting the way for you
would you follow me?
If I told you
that I couldn't promise the wind won't bite when it blows
but I could promise you shelter
wrapped up in my arms
would you follow me?
If I told you
that I couldn't promise some days won't taste bitter
but I could promise life together would be sweet
and that we would always crave each other
would you follow me?
If I told you
that I can see for miles and miles
the beauty in days, the magic of nights
and I could weave them into every moment
would you follow me?
I can tell the truth and make it right
you will know the warmth, see the light
feel the breeze and taste the love
if you have a place in your heart
to follow me.
(c) Dahlia Ramone: May 13, 2018
This was written for Blogophilia
Week 11.11 Topic: A Place in Your Heart
Bonus Prompts:
Hard ( 2pts): Incorporate the phrase "I can see for miles and miles"
(fifth stanza)
Easy (1 pt): Use a country lyric *
(Last stanza)
* Tell the truth and make it right
(from "Feed Jake" by Pirates of the Mississippi)
This week's prompts were right up your alley in Nashville Speak. Romance and happy endings only add to the luster. You are going to make a lot of readers happy.
ReplyDeleteIf you're happy, I'm happy :)
Deletelike warm amber on an onyx night
ReplyDeletewould you follow me?
Best line!!!
I rather liked it as well. Thanks, Brian :)
DeleteLove the determination and optimism here.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tyler. One of these days it'll pay off haha!
DeleteOh my God!! I love this so much!! Can you copy and paste a copy for me? This would make a gorgeous reading at a wedding. You are a true Poet!! ❤️
ReplyDeleteWow, C - that is the biggest compliment. I hadn't thought of it being part of a wedding, thank you for that! And I emailed a clean copy to your email address :) xoxo
DeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteIrene
Thanks, dollface ;)
DeleteYou know we'd follow you anywhere except maybe line dancing. 8 points Earthling!
ReplyDeleteMartien
Haha! You know I'd never lead you into line dancing. A mosh pit, maybe :D
DeleteGo ahead; tell me!
ReplyDeleteSweet. It was a fun poem to read.
ReplyDeleteAhhhhh this is soooooooo damn romantic and dreamy! You did an amazing job, country lyric and all! Love this and love you, Dollface! xoxo
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