Within the dark she knows me well
it's where I hide, it's where I dwell
you cannot blame me, though
for living what I know
paint me up, dress me down
feed me lies, watch me drown
take away all sense of time
reduce me to a pantomime
silent cries or deaf of ear
the story of an unchecked tear
I travel through the darken night
she denies me her moonlight
past to future, dusk to dawn
it's all the same, the heart's a pawn
I give it up, the ultimate price
and roam the alleys of sacrifice.
(c) Dahlia Ramone: August 19, 2018
This was written for Blogophilia
Week 25.11 Topic: Time Traveling
Bonus Prompts:
Hard (2 pts): Use a quote or lyric from Oliver Twist *
Easy (1 pt): Mention a soccer player (I did not)
* I twisted this prompt and
used a lyric from the song Oliver Twist by D'Banj
"you cannot blame me though"
I really get this right now! Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Matt :)
DeleteJayzus... that is dark. But I suppose its good to lay down in the darkness once a while .. makes the light that much brighter. Your poem takes a reader there, though and that is a sign of good writing. I am glad its a school night, i woudln't want to drink after reading this..
ReplyDeleteTrue, I think the darkness makes you truly recognize and appreciate the light.
DeleteI wish it wasn't a school night, I wanted drinks with dinner lol!
You know I am going to want to read this to the world. That would be great for starters. What a poem... This is lethal?
ReplyDeletelol! I imagine I'll hear you reading it to the world some time. You know you always can <3
DeleteI came back for more.
DeleteMy door is always open :)
DeleteOMG girl I love this.... you know I adore a good walk on the dark side, and this is fantastic! Every stanza has some excellent phrasing. Your work is AMAZING, Dollface! xoxo
ReplyDeleteI always think of you when I walk on the dark side - lol! You do it so well. Thanks, dollface - love you!!
DeleteDark and rich with hints of more. Coffee for the soul
ReplyDelete"Coffee for the soul" I really love that :)
DeleteI'm jealous right now. This is absolutely fantastic. You are definitly the queen of dark
ReplyDeletelol! Thanks, Clarice :D
DeleteWOW that was a heart ripper...loved it though, so much!! You are so good with spinning raw emotion into wordsmith gold! Also love this song you attached!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, C - your praise always means a lot to me. Also, I'm obsessed with this song. lol!
DeleteOh girl.... *sigh* You speak my soul. Masterful piece my dear. Oh and now I love a new band...wow...perfect song for the mood! DeAnna
ReplyDeleteYou and I, we are true soul sisters and I love you.
DeleteAlso, I saw a dance routine to that song and was instantly obsessed with it lol! I'll send you the clip, and I will be looking into this band more, I love their sound.
Deep and dark she roams. Excellent piece. 7 points, Earthling.
ReplyDeleteRoaming on the dark side is good every now and then. Thanks, Martian Dude ;)
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