Sunday, October 16, 2016

The Black Rains

 
 
Underneath the shade of misconception
words that don't mean a thing
weigh heaviest on broken wings
 
silence sings and emptiness rings
words curl up and drift away
their meaning lost when no one stays
 
wounds never heal, insecurities bleed
in the dark, the black rains come
seeking redemption, then drowning the need
beneath the stains of time, the feelings disappear.
 
 
Dahlia Ramone:  October 16, 2016
 
 
 
 
This was written for Blogophilia Week 35.9
Topic:  Black Rain
 
Bonuses: Hard (2 pts): Incorporate a Johnny Cash lyric *
Easy (1 pt): Include a fireball (I didn't)
 
* "beneath the stains of time, the feelings disappear" - 'Hurt'
 
 
 
 
 


11 comments:

  1. Stunned! So glad you wrote this ! Fantastic poem! insecurities do indeed bleed

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  2. excellent and so perfect for this weather...and full moon.

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  3. Talking to myself never nets positive results, but talking to others, who are nowhere in sight can be cathartic.

    You and I have some great conversation moments. <3

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  4. Wow, so full of imagery and emotion....this is a superb and succinct poem!!!! HUGGS (((Dollface)))! <3

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  5. Love it, Dollface! <3

    Irene

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  6. Actions resonate long after words fade

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  7. Very powerful in presentation For me the "broken wings" gathered in my imagination and captured my thoughts. 7 points Earthling! :)

    Martien

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  8. deep feelings... very moving.. xxx

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