Friday, March 24, 2017

Peace Out


 
~ Peace Out ~
 

I may not be a man, but you're not one either
your integrity wasn't worth a dime
your aura was toxic, now I need a breather
you have failed me for the last time
 
Your integrity wasn't worth a dime
Mr. Bigshot, I'm no simple lass
you have failed me for the last time
I rock, and I'm rolling you out on your ass
 
Mr. Bigshot, I'm no simple lass
don't think you're the stronger one
I rock, and I'm rolling you out on your ass
peace out, mic drop, I'm done
 
Don't think you're the stronger one
your aura was toxic, now I need a breather
peace out, mic drop, I'm done
I may not be a man, but you're not one either.
 
(c) Dahlia Ramone:  March 24, 2017
 
 
 
This was written for Blogophilia
Week 4.10 Topic:  The Girl Can Rock
 
Bonus Points:
Hard (2 pts): Quote Darth Vader *
Easy (1 pt):  Mention "Tromp L'oeil" (I didn't)
 
*  You have failed me for the last time
 
On another note, my friend Tyler incorporated lyrics
 in his poem by The Donna's, so I did the same.
I incorporated the line
I may not be a man, but you're not one either 
from their song "It Takes One to Know One"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


12 comments:

  1. You rocked the challenge, Dollface!

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  2. All other communications are with my lawyer.

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  3. In every measure, you are a winner here. This is a real stinger.

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  4. I love it - you capture/have that Donnas attitude so down. Although I do have to admit my favorite song off Gold Medal is still "I don't want to know"

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  5. Haha, well I am glad we all participated in the unofficial Pantoum challenge. I absolutely love this!!!! It is sassy and sharp, and sure makes me wanna rock!! :D Well done, Dollface! xoxo

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  6. This is just all kinds of awesome!
    7 points Earthling! :
    Martien

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  7. Total rap song...I can hear it...and I absolutely LOVE IT...this is power woman!! :)

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  8. a strong woman , rocking and rolling him out on his ass, good idea!!

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